SL.1.4: Describe with Details That Matter
Also written as CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.SL.1.4 · Cluster: Presentation of Knowledge and Ideas.
The Official Wording
Describe people, places, things, and events with relevant details, expressing ideas and feelings clearly.
Common Core State Standards, Grade 1, Speaking & Listening · Read it at the source · Checked October 14, 2026
What SL.1.4 Means in Plain English
First graders describe a person, a place, an object or something that happened, choosing details that help listeners picture it and leaving out the ones that don’t. They also say how they felt about it, in words clear enough that the class understands the first time.
Relevant is the word that separates this from kindergarten (SL.K.4), where any extra detail was progress and adults prompted for it. In 2nd grade (SL.2.4) children tell a whole story or experience aloud, with facts, vivid details and sentences that hang together.
SL.1.4 I Can Statements
- I can tell about a place so friends can picture it.
- I can pick details that go with my topic.
- I can say how something made me feel.
SL.1.4 Worked Example
One Saturday trip through the car wash, described twice, and the difference is which details made the cut.
Weekend share: Tell us about something you did this weekend so we can picture it. Say how it made you feel.
Common Mistakes with SL.1.4
Details that wander
The car wash, then the car’s color, then a juice box, then TV
Try this: Ask “Was that part of the car wash?” after each detail, and have the child keep only the yes answers.
Fun, good, nice
“It was fun. It was really fun. It was so fun.”
Try this: Post a feelings chart with a face for scared, proud, silly and surprised, and have the speaker point before they say the word.
A list, not a description
“There was soap and brushes and water and a dryer.”
Try this: Pick one item from the list and ask “What did it look like, sound like or do?” to turn a noun into a detail.
Where SL.1.4 Fits
Practice SL.1.4
Quick Check
- Which detail in the weak description is not about the car wash?
- How does the strong description show a feeling changing?
- Turn “There was soap” into a detail a listener can picture.