RI.11-12.9: Founding Documents and Their Rhetoric
Also written as CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RI.11-12.9 · Cluster: Integration of Knowledge and Ideas.
The Official Wording
Analyze seventeenth-, eighteenth-, and nineteenth-century foundational U.S. documents of historical and literary significance (including The Declaration of Independence, the Preamble to the Constitution, the Bill of Rights, and Lincoln's Second Inaugural Address) for their themes, purposes, and rhetorical features.
Common Core State Standards, Grades 11-12, Reading: Informational Text · Read it at the source · Checked October 14, 2026
What RI.11-12.9 Means in Plain English
Juniors and seniors read founding American documents from the 1600s to the 1800s for their themes, their purposes and the rhetoric that serves both. The Preamble’s phrase the People of the United States replaced a draft that named all thirteen states one by one.
Ninth and tenth grade (RI.9-10.9) traced shared themes across seminal U.S. documents like the Gettysburg Address. Grades 11-12 return to the founding texts and ask how their words did political work. This is the last band of the line, where reading meets college and career readiness.
RI.11-12.9 I Can Statements
- I can state the purpose a founding document served in its time.
- I can trace a theme through a founding document’s key phrases.
- I can explain how a rhetorical choice serves the document’s purpose.
RI.11-12.9 Worked Example
The passage sets the Preamble beside the draft it replaced and the Articles of Confederation, and the weak answer never asks why the words changed.
The Articles of Confederation, in force from 1781: “The said States hereby severally enter into a firm league of friendship with each other.”An August 1787 draft of the Constitution opened “We the people of the States of” and then named all thirteen, from New Hampshire to Georgia.The Preamble as signed in September 1787: “We the People of the United States, in Order to form a more perfect Union, establish Justice, insure domestic Tranquility, provide for the common defence, promote the general Welfare, and secure the Blessings of Liberty to ourselves and our Posterity, do ordain and establish this Constitution for the United States of America.”Commentary: The final wording, credited to Gouverneur Morris of the Committee of Style, did two things the draft did not. It replaced a list of states with a single people, and it gave that people six reasons. Dropping the list also solved a practical problem: the Constitution would take effect once nine states ratified it, and no one knew which nine.Commentary: The phrase “a more perfect Union” quietly admits that the existing union, the league of friendship, had failed, without ever saying so.
Common Mistakes with RI.11-12.9
Summarizing instead of analyzing
“The Preamble lists six goals of the Constitution.”
Try this: Ask students why each listed goal was needed in 1787, then have them connect one goal to a failure of the Articles.
Reading the document out of its time
“We the People means everyone in America was included.”
Try this: Place the document beside what came before it and what its authors argued over, so students read its words as choices made in 1787.
Naming devices without purpose
“The Preamble uses parallelism.”
Try this: Require each rhetorical feature to be paired with the purpose it serves and the earlier wording it improved on or replaced.
Where RI.11-12.9 Fits
Practice RI.11-12.9
Quick Check
- How did the August 1787 draft begin, and what replaced it?
- What practical problem did dropping the list of states solve?
- What does “a more perfect Union” imply about the Articles of Confederation?