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Common Core LiteracyGrades 11–12Science & Technical

RST.11-12.2: Simpler Words, Same Science

Also written as CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RST.11-12.2 · Cluster: Key Ideas and Details.

The Official Wording

Determine the central ideas or conclusions of a text; summarize complex concepts, processes, or information presented in a text by paraphrasing them in simpler but still accurate terms.

Common Core State Standards, Grades 11-12, Reading: Science & Technical Subjects · Read it at the source · Checked October 14, 2026

What RST.11-12.2 Means in Plain English

Juniors and seniors find what a scientific or technical text concludes, then explain its hardest process in plainer words without bending the science. An engineering handbook page on why lithium-ion batteries fade asks students to turn “solid electrolyte interphase” into everyday language and stay accurate.

Ninth and tenth grade (RST.9-10.2) traced a complex process and summarized it accurately. Grades 11-12 add translation: the summary must be simpler than the source and still correct. This is the last band of the line, the reading students need to be ready for college and careers.

RST.11-12.2 I Can Statements

  • I can state a scientific text’s central conclusion in one sentence.
  • I can replace technical terms with plain words that stay accurate.
  • I can check my paraphrase against the text for anything lost.

RST.11-12.2 Worked Example

The handbook page is written for this page. Both answers simplify it, and only the strong one keeps every cause and condition intact.

Read the Story
Every lithium-ion cell begins losing capacity on its first charge. During that charge, a small share of the lithium reacts with the liquid electrolyte at the surface of the negative electrode and forms a thin film called the solid electrolyte interphase, or SEI.The film is necessary: once formed, it lets lithium ions pass while blocking further reaction between the electrolyte and the electrode. But every lithium atom locked in the film is one that can no longer carry charge, and the film keeps thickening slowly as the cell is used, especially when it is stored hot or held at full charge.Fast charging adds a second mechanism. When ions arrive faster than the electrode can absorb them, particularly in cold weather, metallic lithium deposits on the electrode surface instead of entering it. This plating takes still more lithium out of use and can grow needle-like dendrites that pierce the separator and short the cell.Capacity ratings therefore hold only under stated conditions. A cell rated to keep 80 percent of its capacity after 1,000 cycles at 25 °C may reach that point far sooner in a hot car, or on a fast charger in winter.
A short passage written for this page.
Question: What is the passage’s central conclusion, and how would you explain why a battery loses capacity in simpler words that are still accurate?
Not Yet“The passage says batteries wear out over time, like the tread on a tire. The more you use your phone, the more the battery gets used up, so you should charge it less.”It is simpler but no longer accurate. The tire comparison hides the real cause, lithium getting trapped, and it drops heat, full charge and cold fast charging, the conditions the passage says matter most. The advice is the reader’s own.
Meets the Standard“Central conclusion: a lithium-ion battery loses capacity because lithium that should carry charge gets trapped, and how fast that happens depends on how the battery is treated. In simpler words: on the first charge, some lithium reacts with the liquid inside and forms a protective skin on one electrode. The skin is needed, but the lithium in it is gone for good, and the skin keeps growing, faster when the battery is hot or kept full. Charging fast in the cold can also make lithium pile up as metal on the electrode’s surface, which traps more lithium and can even short the battery. So a capacity rating only holds under the conditions it was tested in.”It states the conclusion first, keeps every mechanism and condition, and swaps jargon for plain words, skin for interphase and pile up for plating, without changing what actually happens.
Question Stems to Use
What does the text conclude, in one sentence?Which technical term can you replace with an everyday word without changing the science?What did your simpler version leave out? Does the conclusion still hold without it?Would an engineer reading your paraphrase find anything wrong?Which conditions does the text say speed the process up?

Common Mistakes with RST.11-12.2

Simplifying until it is wrong

“The battery wears out like a tire tread.”

Try this: Have a partner check each plain-word swap against the original sentence and flag any that change what actually happens.

Copying the jargon and calling it a summary

“The SEI forms at the negative electrode and causes capacity fade.”

Try this: Ban the text’s three hardest terms from the summary, so students must explain each one in words a ninth grader would follow.

Paraphrasing the process but missing the conclusion

A step-by-step retelling of film growth and plating that never says why capacity ratings depend on conditions

Try this: Ask students to write the text’s conclusion in one sentence before they paraphrase any process, then check the paraphrase leads to it.

Where RST.11-12.2 Fits

Practice RST.11-12.2

Quick Check

  1. Why does the passage call the film “necessary” if it costs capacity?
  2. Which conditions speed up capacity loss, according to the passage?
  3. Why is “wears out like a tire” not an accurate paraphrase?

RST.11-12.2: Other Names

RST.11-12.2CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RST.11-12.2

Common Core State Standards © Copyright 2010. National Governors Association Center for Best Practices and Council of Chief State School Officers. All rights reserved. Official wording from the Common Core State Standards PDFs at corestandards.org, last checked October 14, 2026. The explanation, I can statements, example, mistakes and practice on this page are EMStudio’s own, written beside the official wording. They are not part of the standard.